Friday, February 3, 2012

I believe that

I believe that you can do anything if you set your mind to it
I believe that there is someone special out there for everyone
I believe that you shouldn't let anyone bring you down no matter what
I believe that everyone makes mistakes and it shouldn't be held against them
I believe that everyone should have another chance
I believe that with in time everything will be better

3 comments:

  1. I really liked this poem, the only thing I'd change would be adding commas and periods or seperating it differently.

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  2. i really like this poem! the only thing i would suggest is to put a little more of who you are into ot. its hard to hear your voice.

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  3. I like the message. I agree with Peggy. The poem needs punctuation. And you should add a metaphor or simile to add some imagery to the poem.

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